This post if for the ages of anywhere between ten and eighty. It is for everyone, an easy read poem. Especially however, for those who love the land! ENJOY
Mountains, hills, trees so green
You look at them and feel so free
Deep enhales of clean, unpolluted air
I want to stay here forever its just not fair
The earths white sand almost touching your feet
It feels so cold and refreshing when they meet
Or the ocean with it's splashing waves
The way their blue and always cave
Whether sitting on a mountain top
Or a piece of log
It is peaceful, pleasant, and pretty
Way better than living in the city
The land is a wonderful place
Full of love, life and different race
So don't forget to take some time
To enjoy the land and the wind chimes!
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Your use of rhyme was actually very well-done, and I wouldn't be a grammar Nazi if I didn't comment on fixing yours up a bit.
ReplyDeleteNice job! =)
I actually have to disagree with Stacie. The rhyme is detracting from the poem which has a lot going for it. Try removing the rhyme.
ReplyDeleteJust make it a bit longer and it should be fine.
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