This is for all ages because again, it is an easy read and it is inspiring. I would like to dedicate it to all the blind people in the world for being strong and happy without sight. You create your own sight, you have the power of that.
It's black all the time
I am used to it, I am fine
It is black everyday
Other's wonder if I'm okay
What you dont know, is that I can see
Just not what you see, do you follow me?
I see many other things
With my imagination which make me sing
You see all the horrible things in the world
But with my eyes i create a neworld
A world where only good exists
A world that no one could resist
With love, laughter, life and joy
And also the perfect fairy tale boys
I am happy, do not feel sorry for me
If you had my sight, you would agree
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Marina it kind of confused me when you talked about "fairy tale boys" or something. It just needs a better conclusion. Don't take this criticism personal. Lol
ReplyDeleteThis poem can be enhanced by taking the perspective of the blind person and showing the audience how he/she perceives the world, rather than making it into a didactic piece.
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